Forum - View topicREVIEW: Stepping on Roses GN 3
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vashfanatic
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Interesting review as always, Lissa....but:
It's "newcomer," nor "new comer." You need a comma between "alas" and "even," "Sure" and "it feels," and "melodrama" and "however." And you don't need a comma between "but" and "a guilty pleasure." I only bring it up because I feel your reviews are otherwise so professional that typos give a wrong impression that you rushed through them, something I cannot believe given how thoughtfully these yours written. |
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here-and-faraway
 Posts: 1529 Location: Sunny California |
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The cover makes it look like he's trying to nurse.
I enjoyed your review. Thanks! |
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