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Plot replacement: takt op. Destiny (TV) [anime 24192].




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PostPosted: Sun Oct 10, 2021 4:50 am Reply with quote
takt op. Destiny (TV)

I feel the old summary is really long-winded and might give away a potentially important mechanic in the plot. The syntax is also not great. I have submitted a shorter one, which I feel conveys the premise more concisely and fluidly.

Thank you.
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