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DoctorDiablo



Joined: 23 Jun 2002
Posts: 2
PostPosted: Sun Jun 23, 2002 1:18 pm Reply with quote
I have, since March, been working on making Kurobei. The hardest part of all is animating it.

You can find it at:

http://destined.to/Kurobei

I'd love to get some more feedback on it, because it would help me improve in the future.
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Tetsuo



Joined: 15 Jun 2002
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 23, 2002 10:19 pm Reply with quote
Cool.I espiecally like the scences where you have a close up of the characters faces and a little box in the corner showing the whole of the characters.Also the ninja fight at the start is cool.Adding some sound would make it a lot better mind you.
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LordByronius
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Joined: 06 Feb 2002
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 24, 2002 1:02 am Reply with quote
What the hell? This is the crappiest Stick Figure Death website I've ever seen.
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DoctorDiablo



Joined: 23 Jun 2002
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 25, 2002 2:14 pm Reply with quote
LordByronius wrote:

What the hell? This is the crappiest Stick Figure Death website I've ever seen.

What the Hell? Did you even read more than one?

Sorry, I was just a little irritated by that comment. Could you be slightly more specific as to what you dislike? Your comment didn't say anything other than idle flaming...
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Cassandra



Joined: 13 May 2002
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 25, 2002 3:36 pm Reply with quote
To be honest, it's OK. I've definitely seen worse. It's a very "Final Fantasy" kinda feel to it, which isn't bad...but not overly original either. And if it's possible, it would be better if the animation didn't loop. It's hard to tell when the episode ends until you realize that you're watching it AGAIN.

Other than that, it's not bad.
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LordByronius
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 25, 2002 4:58 pm Reply with quote
DoctorDiablo wrote:

What the Hell? Did you even read more than one?

Sorry, I was just a little irritated by that comment. Could you be slightly more specific as to what you dislike? Your comment didn't say anything other than idle flaming...


Your inability to detect my sarcasm means I do not like you nor your insipid, derivative web"comic".

Edit: I just watched ALL of them. Yes, ALL of them. And I must say, it confirms my suspicion that the only somewhat-decent sprite-based comic that will ever exist is 8-bit Theater.

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Hagakure



Joined: 17 Jan 2002
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Location: Connecticut
PostPosted: Tue Jun 25, 2002 9:44 pm Reply with quote
Not bad. I like your fight scene before the lead character "dies". I would agree with Tetsuo that you might want to add some sound (although I don't know how difficult this would be to do.) I must say that you don't find too many animated webcomics, so that is pretty cool.

One more thing, I'd add more character dialouge and a character profile page. Alot of webcomics have profiles and they help to clear up past and names etc. without you actually having to portray them in the storyline.

Hope that helps out!
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Cgoten



Joined: 03 May 2002
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 7:58 pm Reply with quote
Sound would really help. Other than that I thought it was pretty good.
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